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27-JUL-2018 Carol J Phipps

A Six Year Old Practices the Art of Rejection

For the first few nights she waited patiently
beside the bed of night-blooming primroses.
She would arrive shortly after nine
to join me in watching the flowers unfurl

their petals one by one. As each yellow face
appeared she jumped up and down with delight.
It felt good to have our feelings expressed
with such a lack of inhibition.

As the days of summer shortened, showtime
grew later and the wait longer. One night
she arrived at the given time and announced,

I’m sorry but I have other things to do
beside stand around and wait for silly
flowers to bloom.

And off she went on her pink two-wheeler.

—Elaine Parker Akin

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Nancy Gall-Clayton 27-Aug-2018 20:56
Great fun! At first, I thought the visitor was going to be a deer (deer love my day lilies), so it was delightful to learn a young child was the one with a mission -- for a while. I like art and writing that makes me think, wonder, and laugh.
Vonnie Coleman 13-Aug-2018 15:20
But I bet you one thing, when she is 36 with her own six year old, she will remember her time with you and the primroses. Lovely, lovely, lovely.
joseantonio29-Jul-2018 04:21
so much beauty in this image.V.
woody3429-Jul-2018 04:02
A delightful image, love the poem...:)
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